The very root of your writing whilst sounding reasonable at first, did not sit very well with me after some time. Someplace within the sentences you managed to make me a believer but just for a very short while. I however have a problem with your leaps in assumptions and one would do well to help fill in those gaps. When you actually can accomplish that, I will certainly be impressed.
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The very root of your writing whilst sounding reasonable at first, did not sit very well with me after some time. Someplace within the sentences you managed to make me a believer but just for a very short while. I however have a problem with your leaps in assumptions and one would do well to help fill in those gaps. When you actually can accomplish that, I will certainly be impressed.